Friday, November 5, 2010

With all my heart !

Well first off...the title of this poem dunno why but I wanted to write this one...could have named it something else but couldn't !!
This poem is dedicated to someone close as in for someone in my family...!! Those who know me do know !!

With all my heart !]



I wanna be there with you,
Not only when the sun shines,
But also when the moon lingers on in the night.

 I wanna be there with you,
Not only when your exploring the hills,
But also when your stuck in a ravine.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only when the smile gleams in your eyes,
But also when frown catches your sight.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only when your friends are by your side,
But also when adversity strikes.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only when you fly high,
But also when you fall from the sky.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only when your brimming with joy of your newborn,
But also when you have nothing to say at all.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only when the days are long,
But also when the night is going on.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only when you walk straight,
But also when your taking your last breath.

I wanna be there with you,
Not only because you love me,
But also because I love you, now and forever.

-Fatima 

11 comments:

  1. awesome poem dear :) :) :) feel acha hai ...good goin

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  2. so sweeet! i luved this! Hey sorry hearing abt the copy of your writing. This is really a crime. You have natural copyrights so if you have proofs you can take action.

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  3. good 1 .............. n sack dat guy........

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  4. hmm.. now i remember to have read it in that blog..
    so sad i thot it was his creation...

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  5. wow!!! sound pretty much like wedding vows...in sickness or in health...it is really amazing...i mean it literally has the power to be something like wedding vows...good job...well penned..

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  6. @ Mohini: Thanks a lot for the comment....yeah its sad too sad to know people copy your work...
    but you have to move on !

    Thanks for reading n even liking it :)

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  7. @ Deepika: Its better late then never right...
    Glad you liked my work...though he had copied it :)

    Glad you read it at least now !

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  8. @ Fallen Poet: Hey thanks a lot...that was quite a compliment !

    Glad you read it and liked it too :)

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  9. @ Valli: Thanks a lot dear !

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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