Brewing Desires!
Though it was too early but she had nothing to do, being
Sunday the whole day was spent idly doing chores she didn’t wish to do or
reading novels. She thought of preparing an early dinner humming soft songs,
she was stirring pots on one hand and kneading the dough on the other almost
ready with the dinner. It was time for him to be back home when the winds
started blowing and the clouds gathered and it felt that it could rain any
minute; when she remembered that some of the clothes were left on the roof and
went to fetch them.
The wind blew rashly and it was seemingly difficult to
manage her sari and locks of hair that flew. In fleeting seconds the rain
started falling in sheets and the very reason of collecting clothes was long
forgotten. Lost in her own world she began dancing drenching to the core and
reveling in the rains.
The
smell of earth, the thundering clouds and the dark sky with the droplets
slashing the window and wallowing trees engulfed her and she basked like a kid.
Her
sky blue cotton sari had clung to her like second skin becoming almost
see-through with her wet hair cascading down her back. The sound of her bangles
and anklets sounded like sweet melody as the bittersweet symphony reverberated
throughout.
This
is how he found her when he reached the rooftop himself drenched from the rains
and the tiredness in him slowly started seeping away. He was bewitched with his
patience slipping away as he watched her from a distance hoping to catch her
attention but all in vain. Slowly yet steadily he walked towards her hugging
her wet form from behind, when he heard her gasp.
“Zaid”,
she stiffened at first but then relaxed in his hold as she recognized the touch
and let her head slump back to his shoulders, “When did you come? I didn’t
expect you this soon!”
“Hmm…just some moments ago”, he replied all
the while burying his face in the crook of her neck nuzzling and inhaling her
scent. She could feel his warmth all around her and his heartbeats going
intense even in that splattering rain.
She
tried to escape his hold and run but he buckled her back to himself holding her
securely over the stomach by one hand while he entwined the other with hers.
“Let
me go the clothes are soaking”, she pleaded her voice heavy and laden with
helplessness and desire. She questioned herself, how could he manage to snap
her self-control within seconds and that too just about every time but she
never got an answer.
Instead
of leaving her or replying to her, he pressed his body more into her gently
trailing his fingers down the entire length of her. The flimsy excuse of the
sari she wore did nothing to help; neither did it conceal nor reveal yet it
aroused him in ways and made him do things. She felt herself going weak and bit
her lips to hold back the moan that threatened to escape.
He
slowly turned her towards him, brushing her hair aside cupping her reddened
cheeks kissing her closed eyes and brushed his lips against hers. She fluttered
her eyelashes, his gaze intoxicating a mixture of both love and lust that she
could no longer resist. She hugged him closely giving herself completely
wrapping her arms around his waist kissing his heart.
In
one swift move, he lifted her in his arms and raced towards the bedroom with a
teasing smile as she buried her face in his shoulder.
The clothes
lay where they were long forgotten and the rain got more intense and thunderous
with each passing minute.
-Fatima
you need to be a writer for some bollywood movies ..
ReplyDeletelovely scene that was full of love, romance and emotions
beautiful
Bikram's
wow this is beautiful. the description is amazing.
ReplyDeleteu laa laaa!!
ReplyDeleteI'm speechless!
* glad i read it/felt it!
inappropriate i kno, bt dis post kinda reminded me of axe commercials :$
ReplyDeleten yea cudn hav chosen a bettr name fr d leadin guy. luv u fr it :))))
@ Bikram: You know I was thinking of applying in Bollywood for writing such cheezy and filmy stuff...god alone knows why I'm acting like this ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read !
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@ Abrar: Thanks a lot:)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.
Welcome to my blog, hope to see you often!
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@ Rachana: haha...quite a song it is isn't it ?? :P
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read... :)
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@ Sadiya: Haha...wrong guess ! First I like this scene too much, wouldn't mind replaying it myself ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd secondly not axe its Wild Stone Aqua that has a similar ad and that's one of my fav ad's outta all :P
Yea, I love the name Zaid and the emotions it stirs :)
Glad you liked it...thanx !
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Absolutely agree with Bikram's comment...u r amazing!!
ReplyDeleteLol i was reading this post to my friend. he has a crude humor. he asked "wanna know the tapori version of this post?" I said sure. and he started playing "tip tip barsa paani... paani main aag lagay" from Mohra. ha ha.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqI4RLjnBbY
omg fatima....are u still the girl i kwen say 3 yrs back....i seriously agree wid the previous commnt....tip tip barsa paani....nice work...:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully woven! :)
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteThat was a wonderful climax! :)
Enjoyed reading it!
Love and hugs my dear :)
Beautiful Post :) ♥
ReplyDeleteLiked your story, great imagery.
ReplyDeletevery romantic.
ReplyDelete-Portia
Hello.
ReplyDeleteOh my! What a lovely, sensual & tender write.
Awesome imagery...reminds me of Rekha & Jeetendra dancing in the rain to the song "Maar Gayi Mujhe", which I absolutely love.
Very nicely done, Fatima!
Thanks for sharing.
For ref:
My Wife, My Priceless Jewel
Nicely written! :)
ReplyDeletesensual , ur imagery is awesome and the narration brings it to life! A visual scene by your words !A good story teller, u are.
ReplyDeleteRohit
floating-expressions
Ooo lalla...quite romantic n well written...<3
ReplyDeleteKeep it up dear!
Love
MAni
Wow!! I am speechless. Sensuous best.I had the entire scene playing right before my eyes. I am a fan :)
ReplyDeletereally enjoyed this brewing desires :)
ReplyDeleteThe rains bring some thoughts from our subconscious and also some dark but burning desires... I loved the way you have weaved it :)
ReplyDeleteP.S Become a bollywood story writer...I agree with Ria and Bikram both :D
Cheers,
@ Ria: Thanx dear :D
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@ Abrar: Oh common! tip tip barsa paani couple din have a room you see..poor fellows were in an under construction site..but I believe in privacy and not PDA so before they thought of going ahead I dutifully sent them to their room :P
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@ Vaisakhi: Well to me I'm the same but maybe for the world I'm changed :)
ReplyDeleteThnx for the read, glad you liked it !
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@ Richa:
ReplyDeleteThank You !
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@ Simran: Glad you liked it girl...thank god it was climax and not anti-climax :P
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@ Shreya:
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
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@ Sulekha: Thanks a lot dear :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it!
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@ Portia:
ReplyDeleteThanx a lot :)
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@ Andy: I've never heard this song before the one you're talking about but I'm sure it must be something !
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm glad I could remind you of something :)
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@ Serendipity: Thank you :)
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@ Rohit: Thanx Rohit!
ReplyDeleteI'm really awed by your comment :)
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@ Mani: Oh common Manisha not that song :P
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it :)
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@ Prosenjeet: Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it and could imagine it!
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@ Jyoti: Glad you liked it!
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@ Tanvi: Yeap, and it burns the insides of your soul wanting so much!
ReplyDeleteOn another not I guess that's not a bad idea, writing for bollywood..chalo koi job nai mila toh I'll try my luck there :P
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Lovely imagery :)
ReplyDelete@ PsycheBubbles:
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
Welcome to my blog!
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