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"As the rain drops caress my soul, let them caress yours too,
Let your guards down and enjoy the heavenly pleasure
of soaking in contentment and glee,
Gathering happy memories with you and giving way to more,
Letting your mistakes and past flow and purify you to the core,
Enjoy this wonderful weather...
With a smile and joy in your eyes like I do !"
The December rains always leave me in a trance, heavy rainfall accompanied by snowfall later mesmerizes me as the weather is considerably below and beautiful and that adds to the unending expanse of scenic beauty as romance is in the air.
Unlike other days, today I'm sitting by the window pane and enjoying the pleasant and exotic beauty of nature contemplating how there was a time when I freely twirled and swirled in the rains and soaked my soul and was the most boisterous girl in the locality, but now I just admire and enjoy the beauty silently just like a demure soul. It is not that I'm a shy person or that melancholy has hit me oft recently it's just I'm observing and looking at life through a different angle. I'm not ignorant but an observant, "Joys and sorrows are a part and parcel of life, one sleeps whilst the other is awake!" I learnt this from him I learnt a lot from him. He showed me the true meaning of love, concern and friendship. When people sympathized with me, he was empathetic to me. He was like the light in darkness and penetrated my abode with ease when others found it crooky. And though we may be apart, we are very much together.
"Twirling and swirling in the rain,
Drenching my soul,
A lone tear escapes...
I wonder and let out a sigh."
I wonder and let out a sigh."
Somewhere, same time he was walking through crooked lanes and narrow roads and enjoying the ethereal beauty of nature, he was not much of a person who admired nature but since the advent of her in his life he gained joy even in the smallest of things. Children danced and giggled in the rains, vendors sold their stuff each and everything was peaceful amidst the chaos. He felt like a free bird, raring and exuberant exploring the world and a thousand Watt smile lingered on his face remembering the words, "Hey, Mayank you walking with an umbrella in these rains? I know its an absurd question to ask but God you seriously don't know how to savor such a beautiful moment!" Tamanna's words rang loudly in his mind.
-Fatima
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Image - Window Rain Drops by Eric Alder
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Nice and sweet. Lines of verse really well written.
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@ Rachana: Chota packet is it?? :P
ReplyDeleteI'm thankful to you Rachi..had it not been you I wouldn't have known of it..and its a coincidence that this part had rains in it
I actually din write it specifically for the blog-a-ton it was just plain Post #5 :)
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So simply and beautifully written....!!
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ReplyDeleteUtterly beautiful. I haven't done so yet, but I shall return to the other posts related to this, so I can get a better picture.
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Lovely, peaceful, heart filling no other words.. something which i couldn't express, you did and wonderfully :) :)
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hey that was one excellent post. Too good.
ReplyDeleteFirst time here, love your wonderful posts.. Beautiful and memories are always are there to cherish..
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to describe a girl, and his lone tear just restoring those beautiful moments.. This post has earned a follower for you and I am sure I will come back here to read the series.. Thanks for writing for Blog-a-Ton..
Good luck for BAT....and ~ the pic became our.. the home became our... ~
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excellent! I liked how you paced your narration, and the way you mingled the verse with your story! and I feel the postscript was unnecessary :) the reader should be able to understand that from your story itself! wonderful words!
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@ Someone Is Special: Welcome to my blog...When I first came here to blogger I never knew I could even have as many as 50 readers...I hardly had one reader and that too a friend, it feels good somewhere people read you, appreciate you and even correct you when you go wrong...something I din have earlier...This place has given me some wonderful friends and reader too..and now I'm glad a versatile blogger like you too read my work :)
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@ Leo: Thanks a lot...glad you liked it!
ReplyDeleteAbout the verses, I usually use them as a part of my post so now-a-days have got some idea how to place them...equally thankful that you liked them too...yeap I know it was a not necessary to have the P.S but something is better than nothing :)
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i had commnted on this one....but god knowz y its not there.....neway.....
ReplyDeletelike like like like super like....loved readin it...peaceful...loved it..:)
its beautiful...verses add an extra appeal to the written part:))
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take care,all the best!:)
and thanks for visiting my blog:)
Hi Fatima,
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful , loved it.
ALL THE BEST FOR BAT 20 :)
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all the best for your exams.. and once your exam is over vote for your favorite entries here
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@ Vaisakhi: Never mind happens at times...
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Hey there
ReplyDeleteEhem,I'm late as usual...:P
I always read your posts..but sometimes I couldn't find the right word(It's too good),that's why the comment comes so late...
Beautifully written,looking forward for more
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Ahh thats beautifully written dear...i want to read more.
ReplyDeleteLate again? Sorry. I thought i commented day before yesterday when i read it but now when i came here to see reply i don't find my comment :(
ReplyDeletewell, its beautifully penned to sooth the senses. And i see myself in that girl.. Its me...
Good one fatima.
What a beautiful story! :)
ReplyDeleteThose few moments in our life, we hold them so dearly, cherish them.
ReplyDeleteRemember, I told you Fatima your words has the power to evoke imagination, its true. I can imagine the guy walking in the rain.
"When people sympathized with me, he was empathetic to me" Loved this!!!
About the girl, somehow every girl can relate to her :)
Hey wont call this Abstract! Well penned..infact at some places, it gives a Point to Ponder feel!
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All the best for BAT!
ReplyDeleteThe demure bond between the two was very bright!
A sweet and lovely romantic, a nice contribution to Blog-a-Ton. Well done ...
ReplyDeleteLove life and rain . . . Always gel together
ReplyDeletenice.....the description is nice....i can feel both their loneliness and searching for each other :0 :)
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ReplyDelete@ Ria: Thanks a lot Ria...glad you liked it :)
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@ Deepika: Yeap..late again but better late than never ;)
Glad you liked it...in fact this one is written after 2 experiences in my life...one from Nainital and the other amchi Mumbai :D
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@ Rachel Hoyt: thanks a lot dear!
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@ Beyond Horizon: I'm glad you liked it and could relate to it!
ReplyDeleteYes every girl can relate to her...we all have certain moments like these don't we..and as I said both are my personal experiences..:)
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@ Mahesh Kalaal: Yes they do...emotions too are at a peak at such a time!
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@ Mahesh Kalaal: yes they do go along well..after all emotions are at their peak on such times!
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@ the critics: Loneliness is a part of everyone's life..isn't it?? but guess we share it with only a certain group of people!
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Loving this sweetness between Mayank and Tamanna !!!
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