Lovely romantic poem :) The only thing I felt to correct was the grammar.. last line of verse 1 and third of verse 2, and title! Grammatically, it'd be You & I :) all three places!
Beautifully expressed :)You and me ..friends forever :D
Very Beautiful.. Love your poem :-)Someone is Special
cute.. it reminds me of the song you and me tonight with these feelings we can fly.. :) :) hey happy diwali to you and your family god bless <3Cheers,
simple yet expressive. the joys of love and pain of separation..only poetry can do justice to it if at all:)sarah
The image tells it all...the poems are mere longings..weaved in an intricately soothing manner.
Its a beautiful poem!!Manihttp://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.com/
Lovely n so romantic. :)
Hello.Visiting from the group Bloggers.The greatest beauty in life is love.Nicely done. Good imagery too.Thanks for sharing.Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Love now and Forever...:)
happy diwali and keep spreading the love:-)
haaye so love love lovely :)
Nice one, the pic is lovely too!
@ Leo: Thanks a lot..and ah! the grammar somethings are done to suit the setting ain't they ;)Glad you liked it :)TC
@ Simran: Yes friends we are and lovers we can be :)Glad you liked it, thanks a lot !!TC
@ SIS: Thank you..glad you liked it :)TC
@ Tanvi: Guess I gotta listen to that song then since my poem reminded you of it!Glad you liked it :)TC
@ Sarah: Yes at times only poetry can express the deep desires of heart and soul!Thanks for dropping by and glad you liked it :)TC
@ Alcina: Even your writings at times are mere longings waiting to be heard and curbed! TC
@ Mani: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it :)It's good to see you here hope you had a good time...hoping to see you again and I'll surely visit your space too :)TC
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@ Andy: Yes love is all around and an ethereal beauty beyond time and imagination! Good to see you here, glad you liked it :)TC
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@ GV sparks: love lovely loveliest :PThanks a lot...glad you liked it!TC
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