Wednesday, October 26, 2011

You & Me



You & Me 

With the arrival of a new dawn,
Memories glisten like drops of dew...
It feels like just yesterday,
When you and me had met...

Breaking from my reverie,
I realize years have elapsed...
Leaving me and you together,
To cherish our coming days!

-Fatima

P.S: Wishing you a very Happy Diwali :)

28 comments:

  1. Lovely romantic poem :) The only thing I felt to correct was the grammar..

    last line of verse 1 and third of verse 2, and title! Grammatically, it'd be You & I :) all three places!

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  2. Beautifully expressed :)
    You and me ..friends forever :D

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  3. Very Beautiful.. Love your poem :-)

    Someone is Special

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  4. cute.. it reminds me of the song you and me tonight with these feelings we can fly.. :) :) hey happy diwali to you and your family god bless <3

    Cheers,

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  5. simple yet expressive. the joys of love and pain of separation..only poetry can do justice to it if at all:)

    sarah

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  6. The image tells it all...the poems are mere longings..weaved in an intricately soothing manner.

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  7. Its a beautiful poem!!

    Mani
    http://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.com/

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  8. Hello.
    Visiting from the group Bloggers.

    The greatest beauty in life is love.
    Nicely done. Good imagery too.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

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  9. happy diwali and keep spreading the love:-)

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  10. @ Leo: Thanks a lot..and ah! the grammar somethings are done to suit the setting ain't they ;)

    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  11. @ Simran: Yes friends we are and lovers we can be :)

    Glad you liked it, thanks a lot !!

    TC

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  12. @ SIS: Thank you..glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  13. @ Tanvi: Guess I gotta listen to that song then since my poem reminded you of it!

    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  14. @ Sarah: Yes at times only poetry can express the deep desires of heart and soul!

    Thanks for dropping by and glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  15. @ Alcina: Even your writings at times are mere longings waiting to be heard and curbed!

    TC

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  16. @ Mani: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it :)

    It's good to see you here hope you had a good time...hoping to see you again and I'll surely visit your space too :)

    TC

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  17. @ Andy: Yes love is all around and an ethereal beauty beyond time and imagination!

    Good to see you here, glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  18. @ GV sparks: love lovely loveliest :P

    Thanks a lot...glad you liked it!

    TC

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  19. @ Yaadein: Thanks a lot!

    Do keep visiting it was a pleasure having you here :)

    TC

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  20. @ Manshaa: Thanks a lot dear..glad you liked it :)

    TC

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