Saturday, October 1, 2011

An Incomplete Story....






Tonight I feel the need to be engulfed in your arms,
Rest my head on your heart,
And listen to the rhythm that surrounds,
Forgetting the world around…

A moment of bliss,
A moment of joy,
Hoping you won’t deny…
Is all that I have been wishing.

I don’t know how does it feel,
To be loved by the one you love,
For once I wish to be there,
To feel and revel.

To stare in your eyes,
To look in your soul,
To melt and merge in you,
Though it only last for a day…

I wish I were the key,
To unlock the doors of your heart,
And know I’m the one,
Who resides in thee…

Tonight yet again I feel the need,
To be the laughter in your silence,
The memory in your moments,
And the song that your heart sings…

- Fatima

20 comments:

  1. hey fatima
    glad to see you posted this... :)
    nice sensitive poem

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  2. beautifully penned....actually it reminded me "the 2.30 hr long trip through the city"....hmm i know the coz i guess....but neways i loved it...:)

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  3. wow.. a bful sunday starts with a bful writing about world's most bful feeling..
    we girls always want to be possessed and held by the one.. isn't it? loved it again fatima!

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  4. Fatima :)


    Quirky stuff, there. I mean, well incomplete stories and all. It's been ages I read or wrote myself anything such as this. Beautiful, though, beautiful poem.



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  5. the last two paragraphs took my heart away-such depth my god!

    and then again the line that breaks my heart:
    "I don’t know how does it feel,
    To be loved by the one you love"
    such eternity in them:-)

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  6. I know ... dont know what to say but I can understand what you say and mean

    Bikram's

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  7. When I read this poem..I felt I'm listening to a song...<3
    Lovely lines dear

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  8. @ ivre: Thanks a lot dear...your feedback means a lot :)

    Glad you liked it!

    TC

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  9. @ vaisakhi: Glad it reminded you of that journey but ermm its not just about it!

    Thanks a lot..and glad you liked it!

    TC

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  10. @ Deepika: Awe it feels so good when someone tells that something by them has made their day or something on similar terms :)

    And who doesn't wanna be protected and loved..the feeling and joy is inexpressible in words...the feeling itself is so complete itself !

    Glad you liked it...thank u <3

    TC

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  11. @ Kankshita: Now I really need to apologize that I'm not following your work but please I'll soon coz I know I've got loads to read :)

    I really can't comment on your reply but all I can say is glad you liked it!

    TC

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  12. @ Suruchi: Thanks a lot! I'm touched that it touched you :)

    TC

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  13. @ Bikramjit: I guess I know what you meant by it and what it feels too!

    I just pray all that your feeling and the phase your going through passes soon!

    TC

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  14. @ Ria: Thank you dear...glad that you liked it ! :)

    TC

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  15. @ Valli: Awe that's a compliment...felt good listening that you felt it was a song..I wish I had the right music for it :)

    Thanks a lot !

    TC

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  16. I don’t know how does it feel,
    To be loved by the one you love,
    For once I wish to be there,
    To feel and revel.

    very true lines :)

    To be the laughter in your silence,

    i guess smile would have been a better word... if love persists :)

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  17. @ GV Sparks: Hmm...I did think of whilst writing but somehow it was silence that overtook :)

    Glad you liked it..Thanks

    TC

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