Sunday, April 24, 2011

Post #4

Its just a random conversation....a part of this series  Post #3

Post #4 


It was a warm evening after a hot and hectic day, they took a stroll down the winding road trying to figure out things between themselves, trying to talk but as usual none took the initiative and were silently walking, when she suddenly broke the silence....

You know at times you feel you had someone in your life to lean on maybe emotional support, to love and to cherish but then other times I feel this all is too clichéd and you just can't expect these things...they are just like an illusion.  

He thought for a while before replying, Some people do get it, don’t they?? Apart from that fact despite the many differences there is one thing that’s common between us…

And what could that be, she retorted back almost instantly?

He was again dumbfounded at the intensity with which she was taking things forward gazing towards the sky he spoke in a neutral tone, No matter how much we carve for love…no matter how much we carve for that rare illusion, but the storm raging within ourselves never seems to cease and we continue to shower our feelings to the people we love and at times it crosses it limits and if we didn’t have anything in common do you think today you and me would have been here together?

This time round she took time to process all that he had said, Hmm…yes there is a bit similarity but yet the gap between us is too much as in the emotional and egoistic bridge. You can be too egoistic and I more on the emotional front and to bridge this gap you should be too compromising and I should give more space then necessary but then is it possible as none is ready to sacrifice after all one is calculative while the other is deceptive though  having our own sets of inhibitions!


He smiled genuinely taking her hand in his and continued walking in silence after all, silence is what they best understood in each other.
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-Fatima

Hope you can connect to it...Do give your valuable views :)



24 comments:

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  2. Hey, Hi

    A beautiful read...though i should say i read the first three parts only today.. :P but a good end..realistic... :P

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  3. Unusual write up. was expecting a poem. nice , nice.
    Different and yet can be connected to.

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  4. @ Eon: Yeah yeah I know you read it before...thank god it ain't sugary coated life before :D

    Thanks a lot !

    Take Care.

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  5. @ Arundhati: Hmm..I was thinking of that only but came up with this one, God after how much trouble and tearing innumerable pages this came out :)

    Thanks a lot, glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  6. lovely post....i liked the last line a lot...silence is what they understood in each othr....every thing falls in place if people decipher a silence correctly....n well frankly i actually had to read post 3 again...:)....loved it....

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  7. this is what v call the divinity of love :)
    and by d way..some deep and profound thots hidden in it too!

    sarah

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  8. Hi Fatima,
    I found your blog link on blogjunta fan page. I got to say you have a nice blog out here.
    This is my first time here. I liked the entire series of these posts and I hope to read other posts as well.

    So you can expect to see my comments often on your posts :D

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  9. Fatima...Claps claps...Can connect to it...already said....Nice write...:)

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  10. @ Vaisakhi: Thanks a lot varsha...Glad you liked it, and to be true..writing this one was one heck of a task for me, but I guess it paid of well :)

    Take Care.

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  11. @ subtlescribbler: Good to see you here Sarah, long time hope you are doing good!

    Maybe yes, this is what they might say love and its divine form as you said and glad you could make out that its deep and not just a random conversation as stated above :)

    Glad you liked it.

    Take Care.

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  12. @ Md. Muddassir Shah: Welcome to my blog Mr.Muddassir and hope that you like each of the coming posts too :)

    Wow, you read the entire series..good to hear that. And also glad that you liked them...
    Thanks a lot for stopping by.

    Glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  13. @ Valli: Need I say more?? coz all that I had to say is what you already know ;)

    Glad that you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  14. It was so blissful to read this, imagined as if the two souls conversing in front of my eyes :)

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  15. @ Poonam: Thanks a lot dear...
    Glad you liked it and wow it feels good that someone could imagine the scene :)

    Take Care.

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  16. @ Ria: Thanks a lot dear!

    Glad you liked it.

    Take Care.

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  17. I can soooo connect to this...

    Silence is more that enough to convey the love that one has for another.
    you just have to let the eyes speak...
    Beautifully written ;)

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  18. Silence does help ease things when at peace. Sometimes, it is the silence of a beloved that is heart breaking.

    Yet, the post was peacefully happy. They both understood each other.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  19. @ Blood Is Red: Awe you here..you really show up at the most unexpected times when I've feel she'll not come by only :)

    Yeah at times silence does convey that the words would have failed too but then again it should be used at the right time, a little here and there and it all goes haywire doesn't it ??

    Glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  20. @ Blasphemous Aesthete: Yeap, silence can be cathartic at times but then other times it can kill and shred you into pieces esp when its by someone close.

    But then I chose to ignore the harshness of it and bask in its bliss, though I'm a chatterbox I adore silence at times like these :)

    Glad you liked it Anshul!

    Take Care.

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  21. @ Fatima
    That is really sweet!!Opposite definitely attracts!!
    I like the little conversation...a little touch of fun...an emotional bonding they share...and that night was so well expressed...infact i felt like hearing the husking voice of that boy...yo babi..got those goosebumps!!

    hence I love such mushy stories!!!Each and every word was so clearly depicting the story of emotions! Yet I hv a complaint! why so small post...it jst started n love disappeared. I wanted to read more..okay got it...this was teh trailor of the beginning of the love in silence..i want it to turn more craving...U knw wht i mean..Yeah...I will be looking forward to next past for sure!! Im already following u still will wait for ur link on my wall..hheehe You definitely have a talent to turn story into poetry...& I simple adore that fact! U sure need to write & share more often!!! I mean it will all my heart!!! Kasam Se!

    Love yeah always..
    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  22. @ Rachana: Oh! my that was too long of a comment must say ;)

    Yeah opposites attract and then they attack! so eventually you just can't bond with someone whose diametrically opposite you, there lies a similarity between the two sometimes visible and sometimes hidden :)

    Glad you liked it..and I hope you like others as well dear!

    Take Care.

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  23. Sometimes silence is the best answer !!!

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