Friday, April 8, 2011

Melancholy of Bliss...


Melancholy of Bliss...

The blurry blue lights brighten up the hill,
Yet the intense pain doesn't seem to still..
Making my mind all jumbled and tumbled
I try to seek solace in the unending deep blue sky !

I'm in a muddle, trapped in a torrent...
The waves pass by my shore and drag me in,
Have I become numb to pain?
Or is that I now truly know happiness ?

Stuck up in between fearing and believing...
Never knew what love really meant..
But the void now seems to fill,
As you've somehow coloured my soul.

In the bottom of my heart,
I know that you'll forever wait..
But my mind seems alien to all this,
And coaxes me that its all in vain.

The locks have now found the keys,
To the veiled emotions that dwell in my heart...
Reaching the end of the unending maze...
My eyes meet yours with a sparkling gaze.....

-Fatima
P.S: Wrote it randomly and used the picture as the prompt !

32 comments:

  1. Nice... her scent is carried from across seven seas and delivered to her beloved.
    They know both pain and pleasure, and how to get one of the forms even when the other form prevails.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  2. You are bk to poetry and you painted the emotions so well..... I loved it !

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  3. Very nicely captured with your imagery.

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  4. Nico nice dear.....Keep it up...:D

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  5. Ah.. Am here finally.
    First of all sorry.. Again for not coming here since 2 months and 8 days.. Yes, i know how long i have been keeping away from blogger :(
    that was really well painted, painted- coz the visual effects it had. And the title seems interesting itself ;) good work charmingangel ;)
    p.s- i'll be back to catch up what i haven't read yet after exams. Just 22 days to go :)

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  6. very nice. i liked ur way of expressing the feelings.

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  7. so this is the picture....hell y didnt i get it 1st...:P...lovely take on tat prompt fatima...i like the way this poem flows...:)...loved this the most..
    The locks have now found the keys,
    To the veiled emotions that dwell in my heart...
    Reaching the end of the unending maze...
    My eyes meet yours with a sparkling gaze...:))
    ...n ya now i know i wasnt very wrong in my interpretation....;)...lovely write....

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  8. @ Blasphemous Aesthete: Pain and pleasure are a part of life, when one sleeps the other is awake... so yes they have some how fallen into the rhythm and going with the flow !

    Glad you liked it :)

    Take Care.

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  9. @ Arundhati: Yep I'm back to my first love :)
    Thanks a lot...glad you liked it !

    Take Care.

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  10. @ Andy: Thanks a lot...glad you liked it :)

    Take Care.

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  11. @ Valli: Thanks a lot buddy...
    Glad you liked it :)

    Take Care.

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  12. @ Deepika: 2 months and 8 days....lol you even counted that :P Ah! yes you've been missing but its alright you're forgiven given the exam thing but after 22 days I'm not gonna spare you :D

    hmm....good to know I painted it well, I was so worried coz the first time I wrote something on a prompt and was so worried if I mislead, glad it came out well :) btw title courtesy Eon Heath he is a life saver :D

    Thanks for finally dropping..hoping to see ya soon !

    Take Care.

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  13. @ some unspoken words: Thanks a lot...and about expressing the feelings I give the credit to the picture :)

    Glad you liked it.

    Take Care.

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  14. @ vaisakhi: Yupiee...I got it before you and waise bhi you always write on prompts this is my first time :D

    Thanks a lot...yeah your interpretation was not exactly wrong also, said you that day too :)and finally I ended up getting the suitable line for the last para...

    Glad you liked it !

    Take Care.

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  15. Wow!
    Beautiful poem :)
    Keep Expressing Dear!

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  16. @ Simran: Thanks a lot Simran...
    Glad you liked it dear :)

    Take Care.

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  17. How to say...each and every para is so awesome..shows different shades of emotions yet compiling love..You are amazing Fatima, how do u find those sweet words to express.. and each word telling each new story and twist of thought...Like it so much.. undoubtedly I love mushy lines so so much..aha Ting!!! I'm in love wit you finally my sweet poet ;)

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  18. Hey, Hi
    hmm...nice imagery...and equally beautiful lines.

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  19. Oh! Your random thoughts are really nice and blissful :)

    Loved the way you have en-crafted each emotions!

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  20. 1st time here....nice blog luv your use of words....

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  21. Hi Fatima,

    You expressed the feeling deep within , so well.
    the imaginary you have used is great creates a scene and make you get attached to the emotions flowing.
    life is as beautiful as we perceive it to be..
    and love is essence and force behind everything wonderful.
    That's life Full package for you.

    Take care
    Enjoy.

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  22. @ Rachana Shakyawar: Awe thanks a lot..got no words ! Glad you liked it dear :)

    Ah you fell in love with me now ? I thought you loved me earlier too :P

    Take Care.

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  23. @ Eon Heath: Thanks a lot and glad you liked the poem :)

    Take Care.

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  24. @ Mary ♥ Mur: Thanks a lot dear...
    Welcome to my blog, do keep coming by :)
    Glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  25. @ Beyond Horizon: Thank you Poonam,
    Glad you liked it dear....and I'm relieved the poem was painted well :)

    Take Care.

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  26. @ Mak: Long time...Hope you are doing good :)

    Thanks a lot...Glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  27. @ Magic Quill: Thanks a lot...

    Welcome to my blog, and do keep coming by.
    Glad you liked it :)

    Take Care.

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  28. @ Vivek Chamoli: Long time since you came here...Hope you are doing good!

    Thanks a lot for, yes life is good full of ups and downs.
    Glad you liked the poem as well as the imagery used.

    Take Care.

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  29. @ Md. Muddassir: Thanks a lot!

    Glad you liked it:)

    Take Care.

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