A continuation from this series...Moments(Post #5)
Symphony of the silent night !
(Post # 6)
It was a cool night after a scorching day, she was sitting by the sea face on the concrete pavement eyeing the vast expanse of sea before her. The full moon was in shades of dull light yellow and playing hide and seek with the dark black clouds that adorned the starry sky, the weather was pleasant after the city was hit by showers an hour or so back... She sat there hugging her knees resting her chin on them. She seemed to be tranquil on the front but was feeling a mess inside, the silent winds sent shrills down her spine resurrecting the buried pain and emotions and a tear trickled from the corner of her eye making its way down her cherry cheeks clouding her eyes, yet she sat unmoved lost in her own reverie.
Sitting on a lone bench,
Eyeing the splendid sea...
The gushing sound of waves,
Brings back some memories to me !
The ardour of rains,
And the calmness of breeze,
Makes me want to believe...
You too care for me !
On days when I fear,
I wish you were there to hold me...
But all I can do is...
Hold back my tears still loving thee.
Neither can I deny,
Nor can I accept,
Yet at times like these...
My heart wishes you too loved me !
Breaking from her trance she realized they were just like the shore and the sea; neither can they be together nor apart but at some point they do meet and at times, wait is the only hope you have. Thinking so she let out a sigh and gathered herself, she was a strong girl and she had to be one for them...she could just not loose hope and cry...maybe love was not meant to be but friendship forever! Saying so to herself she walked home with a smile though her eyes had a different tale to tell.
-Fatima
P.S: Image courtesy google
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeletethe realisation...nice...nicely put..
:)
Regards,
Eon Heath
"My heart wishes you too loved me !"
ReplyDeleteAww, that was special poem.. Love it..
Someone is Special
sad movin...and the last para u wrote....realization...everythin gelled so well....loved it...
ReplyDeleteAlas some things are not meant to be, the way we expect them to be. Someone. somewhere always has better plans.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Its amazing..
ReplyDeleteand it carries feelings so pure, so pristine that one is bound to appreciate them!
nice words!
ReplyDeleteLoved it, can't say much, it was amazing
ReplyDeletevery well written!! :)
ReplyDeleteamazing...keep the good work fatima :)
ReplyDeletei love ur description of teh lonely girl..
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@ Eon: Yeah realisation, maybe it was not that but just a way to comfort her heart ??
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@ SIS: Yes that was indeed a special poem, somethings are always special and this was one of them!
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@ Vaisakhi: Glad that you liked it...you know I really dunno what to reply as a comment to the views I've got...maybe somethings are better left unsaid !
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@ Anshul: Things always don't turn out the way we plan...maybe something good is actually stored in !
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it..thanks a lot :)
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@ Usama Rehman: Feelings yes, they are the ones that conjoin things and add to the beauty maybe that's what they do... :)
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"My heart wishes you too loved me!"
ReplyDeleteWell written Fatima... Touching!
Neither can I deny,
ReplyDeleteNor can I accept,
Yet at times like these...
My heart wishes you too loved me !
Lovely lines Fatima :)
and title was so pleasant :D
@ Serendipity…: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it :)
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@ Valli: So good to see you again :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear...glad you liked it!
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I am so happy to read this...Just it shouldn't be to calm or a temporary control...It should be her strength to keep the faith alive :)
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@ Poonam: You know what it is..maybe it is temporary and maybe she might gain full control but die within!
ReplyDeleteBut yes faith is to be kept alive...if she has to tread ahead.
Thanks for the kind words :)
@ Usama: Thanks a lot :)
I could so easily feel that... :) :) It touched the deep confines of me.. Nice one Fatima :)
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@ Tanvi: Good to see you here! I'm glad that it touched you and you liked it :)
ReplyDeleteSure I'll update it..thanks for the reminder !
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Loved the poem, specially this stanza:
ReplyDelete"Neither can I deny,
Nor can I accept,
Yet at times like these...
My heart wishes you too loved me !"