Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Brewing Desires!



Brewing Desires!

Though it was too early but she had nothing to do, being Sunday the whole day was spent idly doing chores she didn’t wish to do or reading novels. She thought of preparing an early dinner humming soft songs, she was stirring pots on one hand and kneading the dough on the other almost ready with the dinner. It was time for him to be back home when the winds started blowing and the clouds gathered and it felt that it could rain any minute; when she remembered that some of the clothes were left on the roof and went to fetch them.

The wind blew rashly and it was seemingly difficult to manage her sari and locks of hair that flew. In fleeting seconds the rain started falling in sheets and the very reason of collecting clothes was long forgotten. Lost in her own world she began dancing drenching to the core and reveling in the rains.  

The smell of earth, the thundering clouds and the dark sky with the droplets slashing the window and wallowing trees engulfed her and she basked like a kid.

Her sky blue cotton sari had clung to her like second skin becoming almost see-through with her wet hair cascading down her back. The sound of her bangles and anklets sounded like sweet melody as the bittersweet symphony reverberated throughout. 

This is how he found her when he reached the rooftop himself drenched from the rains and the tiredness in him slowly started seeping away. He was bewitched with his patience slipping away as he watched her from a distance hoping to catch her attention but all in vain. Slowly yet steadily he walked towards her hugging her wet form from behind, when he heard her gasp.

“Zaid”, she stiffened at first but then relaxed in his hold as she recognized the touch and let her head slump back to his shoulders, “When did you come? I didn’t expect you this soon!” 

 “Hmm…just some moments ago”, he replied all the while burying his face in the crook of her neck nuzzling and inhaling her scent. She could feel his warmth all around her and his heartbeats going intense even in that splattering rain. 

She tried to escape his hold and run but he buckled her back to himself holding her securely over the stomach by one hand while he entwined the other with hers.

“Let me go the clothes are soaking”, she pleaded her voice heavy and laden with helplessness and desire. She questioned herself, how could he manage to snap her self-control within seconds and that too just about every time but she never got an answer. 

Instead of leaving her or replying to her, he pressed his body more into her gently trailing his fingers down the entire length of her. The flimsy excuse of the sari she wore did nothing to help; neither did it conceal nor reveal yet it aroused him in ways and made him do things. She felt herself going weak and bit her lips to hold back the moan that threatened to escape.  

He slowly turned her towards him, brushing her hair aside cupping her reddened cheeks kissing her closed eyes and brushed his lips against hers. She fluttered her eyelashes, his gaze intoxicating a mixture of both love and lust that she could no longer resist. She hugged him closely giving herself completely wrapping her arms around his waist kissing his heart.

In one swift move, he lifted her in his arms and raced towards the bedroom with a teasing smile as she buried her face in his shoulder.

The clothes lay where they were long forgotten and the rain got more intense and thunderous with each passing minute.    

-Fatima

40 comments:

  1. you need to be a writer for some bollywood movies ..

    lovely scene that was full of love, romance and emotions
    beautiful

    Bikram's

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  2. wow this is beautiful. the description is amazing.

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  3. u laa laaa!!
    I'm speechless!

    * glad i read it/felt it!

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  4. inappropriate i kno, bt dis post kinda reminded me of axe commercials :$
    n yea cudn hav chosen a bettr name fr d leadin guy. luv u fr it :))))

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  5. @ Bikram: You know I was thinking of applying in Bollywood for writing such cheezy and filmy stuff...god alone knows why I'm acting like this ;)

    Thanks for the read !

    TC

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  6. @ Abrar: Thanks a lot:)
    Glad you liked it.

    Welcome to my blog, hope to see you often!

    TC

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  7. @ Rachana: haha...quite a song it is isn't it ?? :P

    Thanks for the read... :)

    TC

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  8. @ Sadiya: Haha...wrong guess ! First I like this scene too much, wouldn't mind replaying it myself ;)

    And secondly not axe its Wild Stone Aqua that has a similar ad and that's one of my fav ad's outta all :P

    Yea, I love the name Zaid and the emotions it stirs :)

    Glad you liked it...thanx !

    TC

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  9. Absolutely agree with Bikram's comment...u r amazing!!

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  10. Lol i was reading this post to my friend. he has a crude humor. he asked "wanna know the tapori version of this post?" I said sure. and he started playing "tip tip barsa paani... paani main aag lagay" from Mohra. ha ha.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqI4RLjnBbY

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  11. omg fatima....are u still the girl i kwen say 3 yrs back....i seriously agree wid the previous commnt....tip tip barsa paani....nice work...:)

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  12. Wow!
    That was a wonderful climax! :)

    Enjoyed reading it!

    Love and hugs my dear :)

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  13. Hello.
    Oh my! What a lovely, sensual & tender write.
    Awesome imagery...reminds me of Rekha & Jeetendra dancing in the rain to the song "Maar Gayi Mujhe", which I absolutely love.
    Very nicely done, Fatima!
    Thanks for sharing.

    For ref:
    My Wife, My Priceless Jewel

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  14. sensual , ur imagery is awesome and the narration brings it to life! A visual scene by your words !A good story teller, u are.
    Rohit
    floating-expressions

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  15. Ooo lalla...quite romantic n well written...<3

    Keep it up dear!

    Love
    MAni

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  16. Wow!! I am speechless. Sensuous best.I had the entire scene playing right before my eyes. I am a fan :)

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  17. The rains bring some thoughts from our subconscious and also some dark but burning desires... I loved the way you have weaved it :)
    P.S Become a bollywood story writer...I agree with Ria and Bikram both :D

    Cheers,

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  18. @ Abrar: Oh common! tip tip barsa paani couple din have a room you see..poor fellows were in an under construction site..but I believe in privacy and not PDA so before they thought of going ahead I dutifully sent them to their room :P

    TC

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  19. @ Vaisakhi: Well to me I'm the same but maybe for the world I'm changed :)

    Thnx for the read, glad you liked it !

    TC

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  20. @ Simran: Glad you liked it girl...thank god it was climax and not anti-climax :P

    TC

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  21. @ Sulekha: Thanks a lot dear :)

    Glad you liked it!

    TC

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  22. @ Andy: I've never heard this song before the one you're talking about but I'm sure it must be something !

    And I'm glad I could remind you of something :)

    TC

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  23. @ Rohit: Thanx Rohit!
    I'm really awed by your comment :)

    TC

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  24. @ Mani: Oh common Manisha not that song :P

    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  25. @ Prosenjeet: Thank you :)

    Glad you liked it and could imagine it!

    TC

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  26. @ Tanvi: Yeap, and it burns the insides of your soul wanting so much!

    On another not I guess that's not a bad idea, writing for bollywood..chalo koi job nai mila toh I'll try my luck there :P

    TC

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  27. @ PsycheBubbles:

    Thanks a lot :)

    Welcome to my blog!

    TC

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