Sunday, January 30, 2011

Longing!

Longing!



Standing on the shore, gazing at the sea;
The sun turns mellow and the sky ocher,
The gleaming water sweeps, as I walk wondering by;
Waiting for his arrival I let out a sigh,
As the sun finally sets, I turn back to see...
On the shore he awaits, just for me!


-Fatima

28 comments:

  1. Wow.. Finally a happy one :)
    loved the set up.. A good a feel and upraising the feel good factor.. You just made my day :)

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  2. @ Deepika: Yeah a happy one after a long time!
    Wow! now that was truly a compliment that my small verse made your day!

    Glad you liked it dear :)

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  3. Nice Picture and emotions going one on one in tandem ..
    It was a nice wait :)

    take care
    vivek

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  4. How can u possibly express everything in so few words.. ?
    i like this .. i super like this !

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  5. Thanks for your comment on my blog Fatima. U hav a beautiful blog too.
    I love poetry n these small posts are quite nice.
    I'll take some time reading all ur posts n will come back to comment.

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  6. Wow! So beautiful
    and a happy one!
    Keep smiling :)
    Take care!

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  7. @ Vivek: I just wrote it and surfed for the pic today, I din even know I would get a pic that would be so apt!

    Glad you liked it and yeah it was indeed a reward-able wait!

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  8. @ Arundhati: It's not every time that I can do it at times I can other times I just cannot!

    Glad you liked it so much..thanks a lot!

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  9. @ Rohit: It's a pleasant surprise you dropped by !
    Glad you liked it..

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  10. @ Priya: Hey glad you dropped by my blog too Priya it was a pleasant surprise!

    And thanks it means a lot that you found my blog to be beautiful, readers like you only encourage me to write further.

    Hope you like my other posts too!

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  11. @ Samidha: Yeah a happy one, finally !
    Glad you liked it and found it beautiful.

    Thanks for the comment dear..

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  12. Aww-finn-some!!
    I'm running short of words!! Fabulous work Fatima.. I'm loving it..!!

    -Areeba

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  13. @ Areeba: OMG...you really here or am I hallucinating ??

    Gosh a comment from you is really rare and getting one is wow kinda off!

    Glad you liked it...and hey I'm falling short of words...
    thanks a lot !

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  14. Wow... U expressed so much in so few lines... Naice!!!

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  15. @ Rafaa: Finally you got time to stop by my blog..glad that you got time!

    Well thanks you for liking it.

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  16. Love is like the northern star, always there, sometimes visible clearly, and sometimes hiding, but there, come what may.

    Nice nifty lines.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  17. "The sun doesn't comes to wake you up twice" but I believe d sun rise once; but d sun rise on d next day too...
    beautiful lines short and crisp and they says it all...
    must say ur a very satiating word-smith.

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  18. Hey, Hi
    Happy Happy post!! dil garden garden ho gaya...hahaha
    nice one re..the end was good...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  19. @ Blasphemous Aesthete: So true also, Love may fade but never cease to exist!

    Glad you liked them!

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  20. @ Rolling Stone: After every night there is a day and the sun does shine even after a rainy night!

    Thanks a lot and glad you liked them...
    "Word-Smith"...hmm

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  21. @ The Silhouette : Hey hie, this time you commented on the day itself :)

    Yeah happy happy post after long :)

    Glad you liked them !

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  22. Finally a happy one... I got so happy... and as usual, you have a thing of playing with words...

    Beautifully written,

    Divya

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  23. @ Divya: Yeah di, finally a happy happy one....
    Thanks a lot...

    Glad you liked it :)

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  24. Very Nicely written, few words which say it all :)

    Take Care
    Bhargavi Kashyap
    http://bhargavikashyap.blogspot.com/

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  25. @ Bhargavi Kashyap: Yeah at times few words fill the void that even long speeches can't do!

    Glad you liked it...

    And thanks a lot for dropping by!
    Hope you liked it here :)

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  26. woaaa..........ncy re.........romantic haan....watzz cooking?????!!!

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  27. @ PraJaktA: thank you!
    cooking?? naah praju nothing is cooking...hope it was ;)

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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