Longing!
Standing on the shore, gazing at the sea;
The sun turns mellow and the sky ocher,
The gleaming water sweeps, as I walk wondering by;
Waiting for his arrival I let out a sigh,
As the sun finally sets, I turn back to see...
On the shore he awaits, just for me!
-Fatima
Wow.. Finally a happy one :)
ReplyDeleteloved the set up.. A good a feel and upraising the feel good factor.. You just made my day :)
@ Deepika: Yeah a happy one after a long time!
ReplyDeleteWow! now that was truly a compliment that my small verse made your day!
Glad you liked it dear :)
Take Care,
Fatima
Nice Picture and emotions going one on one in tandem ..
ReplyDeleteIt was a nice wait :)
take care
vivek
How can u possibly express everything in so few words.. ?
ReplyDeletei like this .. i super like this !
well put in words
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment on my blog Fatima. U hav a beautiful blog too.
ReplyDeleteI love poetry n these small posts are quite nice.
I'll take some time reading all ur posts n will come back to comment.
Wow! So beautiful
ReplyDeleteand a happy one!
Keep smiling :)
Take care!
@ Vivek: I just wrote it and surfed for the pic today, I din even know I would get a pic that would be so apt!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it and yeah it was indeed a reward-able wait!
Take Care,
Fatima
@ Arundhati: It's not every time that I can do it at times I can other times I just cannot!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it so much..thanks a lot!
Take Care,
Fatima
@ Rohit: It's a pleasant surprise you dropped by !
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it..
Take Care,
Fatima
@ Priya: Hey glad you dropped by my blog too Priya it was a pleasant surprise!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks it means a lot that you found my blog to be beautiful, readers like you only encourage me to write further.
Hope you like my other posts too!
Take Care,
Fatima
@ Samidha: Yeah a happy one, finally !
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it and found it beautiful.
Thanks for the comment dear..
Take Care,
Fatima
Aww-finn-some!!
ReplyDeleteI'm running short of words!! Fabulous work Fatima.. I'm loving it..!!
-Areeba
@ Areeba: OMG...you really here or am I hallucinating ??
ReplyDeleteGosh a comment from you is really rare and getting one is wow kinda off!
Glad you liked it...and hey I'm falling short of words...
thanks a lot !
Take Care,
Fatima
Wow... U expressed so much in so few lines... Naice!!!
ReplyDelete@ Rafaa: Finally you got time to stop by my blog..glad that you got time!
ReplyDeleteWell thanks you for liking it.
Take Care,
Fatima
Love is like the northern star, always there, sometimes visible clearly, and sometimes hiding, but there, come what may.
ReplyDeleteNice nifty lines.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
"The sun doesn't comes to wake you up twice" but I believe d sun rise once; but d sun rise on d next day too...
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines short and crisp and they says it all...
must say ur a very satiating word-smith.
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeleteHappy Happy post!! dil garden garden ho gaya...hahaha
nice one re..the end was good...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@ Blasphemous Aesthete: So true also, Love may fade but never cease to exist!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked them!
Take Care,
Fatima
@ Rolling Stone: After every night there is a day and the sun does shine even after a rainy night!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot and glad you liked them...
"Word-Smith"...hmm
Take Care,
Fatima
@ The Silhouette : Hey hie, this time you commented on the day itself :)
ReplyDeleteYeah happy happy post after long :)
Glad you liked them !
Take Care,
Fatima
Finally a happy one... I got so happy... and as usual, you have a thing of playing with words...
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written,
Divya
@ Divya: Yeah di, finally a happy happy one....
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot...
Glad you liked it :)
Take Care,
Fatima
Very Nicely written, few words which say it all :)
ReplyDeleteTake Care
Bhargavi Kashyap
http://bhargavikashyap.blogspot.com/
@ Bhargavi Kashyap: Yeah at times few words fill the void that even long speeches can't do!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it...
And thanks a lot for dropping by!
Hope you liked it here :)
Take Care,
Fatima
woaaa..........ncy re.........romantic haan....watzz cooking?????!!!
ReplyDelete@ PraJaktA: thank you!
ReplyDeletecooking?? naah praju nothing is cooking...hope it was ;)
Take Care,
Fatima