Sunday, November 20, 2011

In The Blue of Night...

He extended his hands towards the fireplace to take in the brisk warmth; his eyes were fixed over the window on the snowflakes which were floating from the heavens dreamily. Their flow reminded him of her gait, she floated exactly like this and ever since their wedding he could hardly keep his hands off her. The thought brought a sly smile to his lips as he stood up slowly and stretched himself, perhaps he should try to warm his wife up a bit. A slight sound caught his attention and he turned around and saw her leaning against the door-frame with a slight smile lingering on her lips, the very sight of her roused him.

She was dressed in simple bare red sari with a golden low cut blouse that accentuated her curvy frame with just anklets and red glass bangles adorning her, her waist long hairs were damp from the shower earlier and were unbraided just the way he liked. His feet were fixated to the floor as he stood there almost in trance, his eyes not leaving her gaze even for a moment drinking her beauty. She slowly walked over to him and stood across interlacing her hands around his neck all the while not breaking the stare, his hands on their own accord twined around her waist interlocking her in a tight embrace and burying his face in her neck taking in her scent and reveling in her warmth.

Parting from him slightly yet standing close to him her eyes held a mischievous glint as she kissed the corner of his mouth and heard him groan, the very sound sent tingles down her spine making her weak in the knees; neither words were uttered nor a touch yet his unnerving intense gaze was arousing her in ways she could not name distracting her from everything else. Without uttering a word she turned around leaning against the wall that was beside her to calm her racing breath; when he didn’t follow her, disappointment started rising in her but before it could get her she felt the lights dimming and his hands touching her caressing her waist. She couldn’t think anymore, her eyes closed and her hands travelled from his chest to the nape of his neck all the way to his hair as his lips found hers, his hands grazing her waist and trailing to her spine all the while.

She didn’t have an idea how much time had elapsed as they stood against the wall plastered together and lost in another world, it was not long before he lifted her in his arms and lowered her down on the bed. Her chest was heaving up and down but she didn’t have a moment to breathe before she found herself in his arms again. 

Mayank, she tried to speak in an almost inaudible voice, Dinner is waiting. 
Dinner and afters are all right here, he didn’t miss a beat as he proceeded in the path that she had started for him tonight.  


-Fatima

P.S: First paragraph courtesy Ivre...thank you for writing it! :)

23 comments:

  1. Fatima.....Its beautifully penned :) One word "sensuous" :D

    Cheers,

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  2. yummy. who needs dinner when dessert is served? :P

    btw u should thank tanvi. i havent read blogs in quite a while and shes actually coaxed me an hour to read this. but yes it was worth it. ciao.

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  3. hey
    this ones great....you r good at this stuff, write some more :)

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  4. Nice write up :)

    http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/

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  5. A beautiful blog and very well written story!!!!

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  6. Wow....that was something! :P hot and tempting.

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  7. Hello.
    Visiting from Bloggers.

    WoW! Dinner, dessert & leftovers of the sensual kind...doesn't get any better than that! (lol)
    Awesome imagery.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  8. I can't tell you how sensuous was it...
    but very bemused by the way you ended it...

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  9. ahem, ahem...Passionate!!!

    Loved your this genre of writing :)

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  10. @ Tanvi: Thankz ;)
    I was so worried how it turned out to be..glad its not that bad :P

    TC

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  11. @ Raj: Glad you gave a chance to my writings and also the fact that you liked it :)

    Yep..sometimes desserts are enough to make you last...;)

    TC

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  12. @ Ivre: Gosh..I din know how come I ended up with this but hell...

    Thankz.. :D

    TC

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  13. @ Elizabeth: Thanks a lot..Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  14. @ Andy: Seriously :P

    Thanks for the read !

    TC

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  15. @ Gaurav: hmm...it wasn't I dunno what more did you expect :o

    TC

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  16. @ BH: Yeap..thought of giving it a try :D

    TC

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  17. OMG!!! now i know wat u were talkin abt...ahem ahem...nice work fatima...shockers rain...:P

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  18. This one is really nice......
    A little more re-framing of sentences and this becomes a classic.

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