Sunday, September 4, 2011

Post #8

Post #8




It was a cold rainy night with the rustling of leaves and sweet murmurs of the nearby stream, sitting beside each other they tried to put an end to the intense longing that quelled their heart and soul but words faltered and sentences broke even before escaping the confines of their heart. It seemed like an eternity had elapsed as none spoke and silence lingered with a melody of its own. Turning towards her with a gleam in his eyes entwining her fingers with his own he took her lips in his for a searing kiss as ecstasy filled the air and all faded in the desolate hour of night. 

P.S: 
With this I come to an end of this series...But as they say, "Every end is a new beginning !"
I hope you guys liked it and could connect to it...  :)

-Fatima



27 comments:

  1. has a very complete n beautiful feel to it....lovely end of the series....n the pic is just perfect...loved it...:)

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  2. Snippiets..I have always lvoed. and yours have been pure sensitivity.. i felt it !

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  3. okayy! finally read all 8 of dem n d gud news is, it wasnt a waste of time :)
    WOW!
    its pretty amazing wat u've put together. also, m nt much of a poem person n yet i really really liked dem in d thrd n fourth post.
    d entire series i think had a slow, easy n fluid feel to it. sumtyms it bcums a littl difficult to tel d differenc between u n d protagonist tho. :P
    all in all an awsesome read n an intricate come to life attention to d tiniest detail.
    pappu pass ho gaya :)))

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  4. so the miracle happened .. and bot hwere together ...

    Bikram's

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  5. I liked this one more than the last one .. coz the slowness and minute description made me eager to hope onto next and with the last word, a smile widened on my lips ... Indeed, some ending are new beginning :)

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  6. Felt connected? perhaps not (and you know why), felt good? Definitely.

    Aakhir kaar, do premi mil hi gaye :D
    Keep up the good work.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  7. and we all like happy endings:-)
    very nice and flowing series:-)
    well penned!

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  8. Wwwoooww! Fatima girl kudos to you! I could feel it :) :) Lovely absolutely :) :) The passionate kiss Ah! so beautiful :)

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  9. Your writing is very flowing..
    Very well written :)
    Haven't followed the series, but I loved the post :) You write well!

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  10. I was away from Blogosphere for couple of weeks, so i missed reading this wonderful series. I should go back and read it from the beginning.

    *Goes off to read*

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  11. This is a really excellent read for me. Must agree that you are one of the coolest bloggers I ever saw.website hosting india


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  12. @ vaisakhi: Thanks a lot varsha! Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  13. @ Aru: Back after long..wow I din knew you liked them..honored!!

    Thanks a lot.

    TC

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  14. @ Sadiya: haha..thank god you were not bored and you liked it..I was pata nahi what's gonna be her verdict :P

    But glad that you took time out and read my short series..and really glad that you enjoyed reading it and liked it too :)

    TC

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  15. @ Bikramjit: Miracles do happen don't they ?? It's just we need to have faith on ourselves and our love :)

    TC

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  16. @ adreamygal: Hey how are you ?? Its been long that I saw you !

    Yea..nothing simply comes to end before paving a new road for a new journey!

    Glad you liked it..:)

    TC

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  17. @ Ria: Yeap finally... I too loved the ending ;)

    TC

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  18. @ Anshul: Out of all the people I was expecting such a comment from you..connection pe... :P

    Haan yaar socha mila hi dun kyun tadpau becharo ko..

    thanks for liking!

    TC

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  19. @ Suruchi: Naah..we always don't have happy ending..we need to make our endings happy :)

    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  20. @ Tanvi: Frankly speaking I was studying and this kissing line god knows from where it came up..and I realised this is my series ka end..a short but love filled kiss :D

    I'm so glad you could connect to it, somehow I knew you would..coz your not like Anshul :P

    TC

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  21. @ Philo: Thanks a lot for the appreciation !

    Glad you liked it...

    TC

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  22. @ Hamza: You should definitely..and I'm waiting to hear your views :D

    TC

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  23. @ Jack: Glad you liked it...

    Welcome to my blog, it was a pleasure having you here!

    Hope to see you again :)

    TC

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  24. @ web hosting: wow that was quite a compliment ! Glad you found my writing good :)

    Welcome to my blog, its a pleasure having you here!

    Hope to see you again!

    TC

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  25. Oh God ... This is the last chapter? :-(

    I want more ...

    Anyways, what a brilliant piece Fatima ... the story was beautiful, the relationship carefully explored, and the moments sensitively captured ... thanks for sharing this masterpiece with us :-)

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