Sunday, September 18, 2011

From The Bottom of My Heart!


From The Bottom of My Heart!

Years rolled and seasons changed,
Yet everything still remained the same...
Spring meant joy and winter bought gloom,
Still I was the same, all lonesome!

Only friendship ruled,
And love didn't mean a thing...
But it doesn't seem to be true anymore,
As your now a part of my soul!

Words fall short and emotions overflow,
One moment I'm dancing like a daffodil...
The other as dull as a withering rose,
Yet I dunno how should I tell ??

That, I love you in the spring...
And love you even in the fall...
In noon and also the moonlit hours,
And will always, with my heart and soul!

-Fatima

P.S: I had written this poem back then on 17th March '11 on the request of a friend of mine...Finally posting it here :)

32 comments:

  1. "Words fall short and emotions overflow" I loved this line the most of all.

    Hope the loneliness passes away with time and every season brings reasons to rejoice.. :-)

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  2. It's filled with lots of emotions :)
    Naice!

    weaved from bottom of the heart indeed :)

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  3. yes very nice,
    That, I love you in the spring...
    And love you even in the fall...
    In noon and also the moonlit hours,
    And will always, with my heart and soul!

    Lovely words...

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  4. Nicely composed to showcase the beauty of friendship……

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  5. The post should have come much before. It's poetic in many ways. :)


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  6. Loved it...u shud hav posted it long ago!

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  7. my kind of poem on friendship and what it means

    Bikram's

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  8. loved it...long back....guess i was the 1st one to read it...:P....n hope she liked it too...:)

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  9. the last paragraph is dipped in such eternity:-)
    very expressive n poetic and yes, seasons to reflect us in many ways and also how we feel:-)

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  10. Very beautiful....Love is love....Change of seasons doesn't matter !!

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  11. Absolutely beautiful angelkins, love it to the core for its simple elegance. - Sara

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  12. I love the picture :)
    And the poem is so sweet. I loved how you ended it :)

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  13. Only heartfelt emotions can string such beautiful words together. Nice poem:)

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  14. lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

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  15. @ Manshaa: Replying here almost 6-7 months later and all I can say is its warm n merry :)

    TC

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  16. @ Alcina: It is indeed...

    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  17. @ the other side of me: Thanks a lot dear :)

    TC

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  18. @ BA: Sometimes, its not the right time and other times the time is not right...either way it came then and the replies now :)

    TC

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  19. @ Ria: I know but sometimes you just have to wait a bit more :)

    Thanks a lot dear!

    TC

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  20. @ Vaisakhi: Yeap, you were..and yea she liked it!

    Thanks for the review

    TC

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  21. @ Suruchi: Well not just seasons, there is a lot more too :)

    TC

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  22. @ Sara: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it.

    TC

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  23. @ Aishwarya: I guess so..but sometimes even after feeling words don't come out...that's difficult!

    Glad you liked it.

    TC

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  24. Beautiful writing straight from heart, Fatima:)

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    1. @ Rahul Bhatia: Thanks a lot Uncle :)

      TC

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