Thursday, September 1, 2011

Fantasy...



Fantasy

The pain has frozen,
And the tears barely fall...
Feel to be engulfed in your embrace,
And be cocooned in your arms.

Wish life was a fairy tale,
With love conquering all...
Where the prince charming kissed,
And all was well after all.

But life is a harsh reality,
Each step you walk, a sacrifice awaits...
Why you and me, I ask??
Ah! God doesn't answer just a smiling face.

-Fatima

P.S:  Edited the P.S somehow don't want everyone to read it :)

41 comments:

  1. the poem was touching.
    p.s part tho seemed a lot more disturbing.
    i hope ur doin ok sistah! :)
    best i can do is ask u to read funny stuf, eat ur fvrt food n get a swanky haircut.
    fir dekhna sab thik ho jayega!
    oh n eid mubarak! tc :)

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  2. God would not answer all your questions, if He did, why were you sent here after all?

    Perhaps, his smile says it all :D


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. beautiful verses....this reminds me of "the soul's prayer"-sarojini naidu....very touchin indeed...but y the blues post eid...cheer up....n write somethin on peace too coz i know u can n u should....i want u to enter the competition....:)

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  4. its beautiful..and yes i wish life is a fairy tale too...

    Life is not an easy walk but its worth every step..

    God will smile when you smile:):)

    take care

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  5. @Sadiya: Thanks a lot Sadiya...for liking the poem !

    the ps is disturbing coz somewhere maybe I am disturbed...this poem was written a week back but the ps is still fresh..but hey I'm doing good..and Eid was also wonderful!

    Eid Mubarak to you too :)

    TC

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  6. @Anshul: ehehe.. .bus hamesha ek line ko pakad lete ho aur jawab dete ho lekin jo bhi line lete ho..ya khuda wohi toh sab kuch keh jaati hai !

    Glad you liked the poem :D

    TC

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  7. @Vaisakhi: Thank you girl! Now I'm gonna go and surf the net for the poem you just mentioned...I love her poems :)

    Ermm...yaar hota hai isa mood kabhi kabhi and eid was awesome..thanks to you guys all of them..thnx fr making my day memorable :)

    Last date of poem submission was today :(

    TC

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  8. @theothersideofme: Yes, life is not a cake walk but we..by our love and understanding and being together always in times of need and harmony can make life easier...love makes even the struggles seem to be worth :)

    Glad you liked the poem dear !

    TC

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  9. "Why you and me, I ask??"

    It's lovely...
    Hope u r doing fine. Tc.

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  10. Fatima! :)

    I hate the terms Prince and Charming, I loathe me for, they can make me laugh in the strangest backgrounds. Hate em for the humor. :P

    But the poem's, really cool. You write well, and you write in amazing flow, so even the most known problem of soul that writes seems distinct! ;)

    Cheers!

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  11. Fantasy...let not it create a illusion..
    As i already said..its really nice!

    And just one wish that hope the wishes would come true one day!

    *Fingers crossed*

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  12. So Deep...really true and straight from the heart poem...wish dream was reality and reality was a dream :|

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  13. Ur words always strike a chord in the heart. beautiful.

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  14. U said it .. its not a fairy tail .. Life is FUNNY ...

    lovely poem

    Bikram's

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  15. I am sure after penning this down, peace must have taken birth :)

    Hmm...fantasy,fairytale, we say they aren't real. But its we who have created them, so it definitely has some touch of reality too.

    So dont worry, the prince charming will come and call your name soon ;)

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  16. sometimes life is cruel and our expectations make it crueler...

    it's a beautiful expression Fatima of what life and love is all about-but despite all the disappointments, I'll say-don't give up hope...neither on love...nothing is more beautiful even in all its pain!:-)

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  17. @ Priya: Hey hie, I'm good how are you ?? Long time...Hope you too are doing good :)

    Thanks a lot..and glad you liked it !

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  18. @ Kankshita: I know that so well..how much those words piss you off..gosh thank god I'm spared of the lecture :P

    But on another, I'm glad you din run away and liked it..coz all I do now-a-days is write about love pain and pleasure..and still I'm not bored weird ;)

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  19. @Alcina: I wish the wish comes true..and if it does..Inshallah *fingers crossed* you get what ever you want...personal treat :P

    Thank you for liking it..you know what I mean rite :)

    TC

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  20. @ Valli: But would have it been any better if dream was a reality and vice versa..we would still have cribbed...human nature isn't it ??

    Glad you liked it dear :)

    TC

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  21. @ Ria: You flatter me..;)
    but glad to hear that... :)

    TC

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  22. @ Bikramjit: Don't we do that always...we know the answers are there with us and within us..yet we search them outside..maybe we want some satisfaction that's it!

    TC

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  23. @ Poonam: True we are the creators and we are the cribbers too..

    Pinch of reality is there..but its upto us to see or avoid it!

    And I'm so waiting for him...jisse pyar kiya wahi prince hoto kitna aacha lagta hai :)

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  24. @ Suruchi: True..."Hope is the rope that swings you through life" ..this is my fav quote and I believe in it from the bottom of my heart...

    but at times when all you see is darkness you want to let go but then you realize you just unable to let go the bond is so strong and deeply rooted in your heart..even if it hurts and pain it gives pleasure too!

    Its weird..you fight even when you know your gonna lose..madness i guess but love is madness rite ??

    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  25. @ Unknown: Thanks a lot, glad you liked it!

    Welcome to my blog!
    Do keep visiting, it was a pleasure having you here :)

    TC

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  26. :)...if u see God smiling...then have faith...He always has the best in store for us:)

    and btw....lovely poem...enthralling really:)

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  27. A very beautiful poem here :)
    His smile says it all ...

    Hugs and love !!

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  28. We all wish that ours could be like fairy tales..
    But then, we must jump back to the reality! This is how life is :) And we have to learn to deal with it.
    Scarifies we will have to make, pain we will have to bear. But in the end, have faith and don't lose hope :)
    Loved the poem.
    Thank you for your comment :) Do come by again.
    Take Care..

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  29. Hey, Hi

    u edited the ps?? theres nothing there!!!

    :P

    except fo the last end, the rest had a nice flow to it..
    :)

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  30. @ the floodgate of feelings: Yeap he has the best in store for us :)

    Glad you found the poem lovely...thanks for the lovely feedback!

    TC

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  31. @ Simran: Thanks a lot dear...

    Glad you took time out to come here :)

    TC

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  32. @ Philo: Agreed to what you said, coz its true!

    Welcome to my blog!
    Glad you visited..Do keep visiting, it was a pleasure having you here :)

    Btw you have a lovely blog!

    TC

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  33. @Eon: Yea I edited the p.s tere se hi toh chupana tha uncle :D

    Yea the flow maybe has drifted but the feeling has been conveyed I guess :)

    TC

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  34. Love it a lot little one...sometimes the answers we seek are within us. Loads of love - Sarah

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  35. the phase when the pain doesn't hurt anymore but makes us numb.. some questions, I tell you, are better off left unanswered!
    Smile, for there would always be reasons not to, but for the gift that it is.
    And gone through, it eventually gets sorted out in life :)

    aJ

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  36. @ Sarah: Its been so long..how have you been doing dear ?? Hope everything's good!

    Glad you liked it...I don't have words..thanks a lot !

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  37. @ aakash: Yes its better that some questions are not meddled with..life is simpler that way!

    Glad you liked it!

    TC

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  38. @ Jack: Thank you...
    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  39. I believe that answers lie within..

    Whenever you look outside the window,
    You see things have changed
    And people have moved on,
    And you feel you have nothing left
    Ah! no you have,a bundle of memories!
    Memories are the only door to the future & windows to the past,
    They reflect you today
    But don't conceal your past,
    Don't be depressed over what happened yesterday,
    But, vow today not to let it happen tomorrow;
    For life is only once lived
    But the nostalgia lives forever!

    And I found it..

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