Sunday, September 25, 2011

Chapter 1:



Chapter 1:

He sat on the counter top at a bar, combating with himself he gulped down his drink in one go the sour taste lingered in his mouth a little longer smoldering his throat but nothing could wipe of the sugary taste of her lips from his very own.

-Fatima


7 comments:

  1. I am angry with you :/.. The opening lines were so beautiful, wanted more of it. DSont keep the suspense hanging for long , next part pleaseee :)

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  2. Ah! Interesting plot :) :) Eager for the next :)

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  3. beautiful lines...but again no more?
    if you can't increase the length, increase the frequency-post every hour!:-)

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  4. Hey nice lines..I loved it..waiting for the next one :):):)

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