Monday, October 6, 2014

Absence of Joy


breathing shallow breaths
bare soulless standing all alone
withering away in cold

-Fatima


6 comments:

  1. Captures a damp, morose and subdued aura perfectly. Reminded me a lot of the White Walkers in Game of Thrones..:D

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    1. Seriously GoT?? :P Thanks a lot for this, means so much :)

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  2. The cold, loneliness and the pain ... so well captured ... loved it :-)

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    1. Thanks Amrit, my Haiku teacher. I've learnt a lot from your writings :)

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  3. something about winter that accentuates loneliness... well written ! :)

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