Sunday, February 5, 2012

Sleepless Mirage...


Sleepless Mirage...

Stark silence enveloped and darkness was all that was around. A pair of lust filled eyes stared at her and the creepy crawly feeling of his groping hands engulfed. Waking up from her dream she let out an exasperated cry. Agonized screams filled the space as tremors shook her frame and then all lay still.

-Fatima

P.S: My 2nd 55 Word Fiction..I hope what I wanted to convey is conveyed...really worried !!
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22 comments:

  1. VaisakhiSunday, February 05, 2012 2:19:00 PM

    "grudge"....grippin really....nice one..:)

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  2. BikramMonday, February 06, 2012 1:29:00 AM

    OH GOD..
    sad sad state of affairs of the women in our nation ...

    Bikram's

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  3. Sri ValliMonday, February 06, 2012 10:00:00 AM

    Good one dear :)

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  4. BeyondMonday, February 06, 2012 10:40:00 AM

    message well conveyed. evil has lived just for too long, it's time for awakening..

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  5. Sarah malikMonday, February 06, 2012 3:24:00 PM

    yes..u dont need to worry, its nicely penned with more than one message to convey :)


    sarah

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  6. RiàMonday, February 06, 2012 4:13:00 PM

    its very well written...so dont u worry.

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  7. Eon HeathSunday, February 12, 2012 3:28:00 PM

    hmm, nice....

    like i always left, fewer the words, the more is the impact...

    Regards,
    Eon..

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  8. the other side of meThursday, March 01, 2012 5:24:00 AM

    deep words..tremors shook her frame and then all lay still..I think that explains all well

    Take care :)

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  9. SimranSunday, March 18, 2012 11:55:00 AM

    Conveyed so well my dear ...
    I love your blog's new look!
    Its Awesome! :D

    Award award award... waiting for you :D

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  10. Ritz..Sunday, April 01, 2012 8:30:00 PM

    You conveyed too many stories .... in 3 lines... and that too in an impactful manner...

    Kudos!!

    Ritz..

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  11. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:52:00 PM

    @ Vaisakhi: Thanks a lot girl!
    Glad you liked it :)

    TC

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  12. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:53:00 PM

    @Bikram: Yeap, a pretty sad state..but it just doesn't affect this state but even States ;)

    Thnx for the read!

    TC

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  13. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:53:00 PM

    @Valli: Thanx di :)

    TC

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  14. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:54:00 PM

    @Beyond: After evil fades good finally prevails.

    Thnx for the read!

    TC

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  15. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:56:00 PM

    @Sarah: Thanks a lot dear...Glad you could find more than one meaning! :)

    TC

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  16. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:57:00 PM

    @Ria: Thanks dear :)

    TC

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  17. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:57:00 PM

    @Eon: Yeap, the less the more :)

    Glad you liked it!

    TC

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  18. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:58:00 PM

    @the other side of me: Thanks a lot dear!

    TC

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  19. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 8:59:00 PM

    @Simaran: Thanks buddy...and yeap I'll collect the award soon..thanks a lot :)

    Glad you liked it!

    TC

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  20. FatimaMonday, April 09, 2012 9:00:00 PM

    @Ritz: Thanks a lot..glad you liked it!

    Thanks for the read.

    TC

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  21. KappuSaturday, May 05, 2012 12:07:00 AM

    Nicee!! ;) I love 55 fiction, thanks for this. Check out mine, if you stop by...

    P/s I am super new to this! :)

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  22. FatimaSunday, May 13, 2012 12:19:00 PM

    @ Kappu: Thanks a lot!
    Glad you visited :)
    Do keep coming by.

    TC

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