Thursday, May 5, 2011

....Jaane Anjaane....



....Jaane Anjaane....

Bewafa na mein, bewafa na woh...
Zindagi ke mele mein,
Pyaar ke khel mein,
Tanhan hoon mein, tanhan hai woh....

Phool aur kaantein,
Raastein mein beche hai dono...
Girte sambhalte aapni manzil ki aur chalte,
Bahar aur patjhad ke jaise hum milte bichadte...

Zindagi ke iss khel mein,
Anjaan se safar mein,
Tanhan hoon mein...
Najaane kaisa hai woh?

-Fatima

P.S: A poem in Urdu after long back though its a bit small...hope you guys like it, will wait for your comments as well as constructive criticism as always... :)

30 comments:

  1. I donno urdu much...but read this poem...Nice one darlz...:D

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  2. shayed use bhi tanhai stati hogi
    shayed use bhi tumhari yaad aati hogi
    ye sochta hoga vo bhi akele mein
    "kya tumhe bhi uski awaaz aati hogi?"

    beutiful verse fatima..
    and yes, i m back :)

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  3. @ Valli: I know dear you dunno much of Urdu so I wasn't even expecting a feedback...but I'm glad you read it and btw it was not so difficult also :)

    Glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  4. @ Deepika:

    "Yeh toh bus khuda hi jaane,
    k yeh saath pal bhar ka tha ya umer bhar ka...
    Lekin yeh jaan k dil ko sukun zarur hota,
    ke usse bhi utni hi yaad satati hai!"

    Thanks a lot Deepika, glad you liked it !
    Welcome back!!

    Take Care.

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  5. Versatile!! Love & appreciate da fact that u've tried ur hand in dis lingo too.. Good one.. ;)

    --AREEBA

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  6. @ Areeba: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it!

    well its not my first attempt you see and also given the fact this is my mother tongue :P

    Take Care.

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  7. nice one fatima...
    'woh honge tanha is safar mein ab bhi...pachtate honge apne akelepan mein...chate honge saath tumhara...wapas mudne ki rah talash te honge...:)'

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  8. This is wonderful Fatima , reminded me of someone from old times . I love reading hindi verses , there is some beauty in those simple words , but somehow i just cant write myself ..but reading you , has made me smile :)

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  9. This is the story of a boy and a girl, trying to find love in this big world... somehow thy're together... not Romeo not Juliet... ~Bryan Adams

    Nice lines Fatima :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  10. Hey, Hi

    nice lines...thoughtful words...


    Regards,
    The Silhouette..

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  11. well penned :)
    and atlast i am able to comment now

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  12. @ Vaisakhi: Wow nice lines Vaisakhi...


    "Hum nai jante woh humara saath chahte hai ya nahi?
    Lekin itna zarur dil se kehenge...
    Aaj bhi woh laut aaye toh..
    unhe khushi se aapni zindagi bana lenge...
    Akhir wahi toh hamari jaan aur zindagi hai!"


    Glad you liked it :)

    Take Care.

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  13. @ adreamygal: Awe, that was good to hear that my few words reminded you of someone..it feels nice to hear this :)

    Glad that you liked it..
    Thanks a lot !

    Take Care.

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  14. @ Anshul: Nice song... :)

    Glad you liked it..

    Take Care.

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  15. @ Eon: Thanks a lot..glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  16. @ Muddasir:

    hehe..finally you are able to comment :P

    Glad you liked it!

    Take Care.

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  17. Andekha sa,
    anjana sa,
    Kahin toh hoga!!

    Nice lines Fatima..:):)

    Cheers,

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  18. @ Tanvi:

    Andhekha hai lekin anjaan nahi...kahin toh hoga, aur jahan bhi hoga jaise bhi hoga...dil se yahi dua nikalti hai khush ho :)

    Thanks a lot!

    Take Care.

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  19. Sochh rahi hu main...
    bolun yaa padun post ko
    padun ya bolun irshadd tum haise host ko!

    koshish hai tumhari jo
    shayri k andaz mein rang laayi hai..
    koshish hai hamari jo
    aaj zubaan pe aayi hai

    tumhare shabdon mein bolun
    aur apne shabdon mein main gholun..

    aaj nahi toh kal...
    zara zara..si koshish mein..
    sikh hi jayenge
    hum bhi josh mein shaiyri k kuch bol!


    wah wah... :P
    SORRY but kya karu...tum aur deepika bhi itni acchi shaiyri bol rahi thi ki maine socho main bhi kuch try mar hi lun..hehe.. pata nahi kabhi mauka mile ya na mile... ;)

    Anyways..I'm not into so much of shaiyri..par kya karu...pichha hi nahi chodti kambakhat.. ;)
    muhaaa muhaa..love u...yahi hai jo mujhe aata hai sahi se...iss pe hi wah wah kar de meri jaan :*

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  20. @ Felicity: Thanks a lot!
    Glad you liked it.

    Welcome to my blog, hope to see you next time too.

    Take Care.

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  21. @ Nostalgic:
    Thanks a lot!
    Glad you liked it.

    Welcome to my blog, hope to see you next time too.

    Take Care.

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  22. @ Rachana: Mein toh aapki kavita k samne kuch nahi keh sakti sivae..wah wah ke ;)

    Really rachi it was a nice one...and hey I do try my hand at this at times, but lemme tell you when it comes to real hindi and urdu I'm at loss of words half of the time...hehe but not that bad also :)

    Glad you liked it and thanks a lot for the wonderful poem above :)

    Take Care.

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  23. I know even he might be thinking the same, Jaane Anjaane mein hi sahi.

    Beautiful lines.

    The continuation given by Deepika and again by You is simply amazing. YOU GIRLS ROCK :);)

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  24. @ Beyond Horizon: Ah! I wish the same too...but sometimes you never know.

    hehe...that continuation just happened by a fluke at least from my side...but glad that you liked it Poonam :)

    Thanks a lot!

    Take Care.

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  25. @ Noshi: Thanks a lot..glad you liked it!

    Welcome to my blog...do keep coming by :)

    Take Care.

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  26. Loved it Fatima, it was touching. The title is also catchy.

    Jaane Anjaane :)

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  27. @ Animesh: Thanks a lot..glad you liked it:)

    Welcome to my blog!

    Take Care

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