Chapter 1:
He sat on the counter top at a bar, combating with himself he gulped
down his drink in one go the sour taste lingered in his mouth a little longer
smoldering his throat but nothing could wipe of the sugary taste of her lips
from his very own.
-Fatima
I am angry with you :/.. The opening lines were so beautiful, wanted more of it. DSont keep the suspense hanging for long , next part pleaseee :)
ReplyDeleteAh! Interesting plot :) :) Eager for the next :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines...but again no more?
ReplyDeleteif you can't increase the length, increase the frequency-post every hour!:-)
Hey nice lines..I loved it..waiting for the next one :):):)
ReplyDeleteLips of an angel
ReplyDelete:D
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Loved it...no where's the rest?
ReplyDeletetoo ru rooooo
ReplyDeleteden den dennnn? :o