You
& Me
With
the arrival of a new dawn,
Memories
glisten like drops of dew...
It
feels like just yesterday,
When
you and me had met...
Breaking
from my reverie,
I
realize years have elapsed...
Leaving
me and you together,
To
cherish our coming days!
-Fatima
P.S:
Wishing you a very Happy Diwali :)
Lovely romantic poem :) The only thing I felt to correct was the grammar..
ReplyDeletelast line of verse 1 and third of verse 2, and title! Grammatically, it'd be You & I :) all three places!
Beautifully expressed :)
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Very Beautiful.. Love your poem :-)
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cute.. it reminds me of the song you and me tonight with these feelings we can fly.. :) :) hey happy diwali to you and your family god bless <3
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simple yet expressive. the joys of love and pain of separation..only poetry can do justice to it if at all:)
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The image tells it all...the poems are mere longings..weaved in an intricately soothing manner.
ReplyDeleteIts a beautiful poem!!
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Lovely n so romantic. :)
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The greatest beauty in life is love.
Nicely done. Good imagery too.
Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Love now and Forever...
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happy diwali and keep spreading the love:-)
ReplyDeletehaaye so love love lovely :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb abstract...
ReplyDeleteNice one, the pic is lovely too!
ReplyDelete@ Leo: Thanks a lot..and ah! the grammar somethings are done to suit the setting ain't they ;)
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@ Simran: Yes friends we are and lovers we can be :)
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@ SIS: Thank you..glad you liked it :)
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@ Tanvi: Guess I gotta listen to that song then since my poem reminded you of it!
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@ Sarah: Yes at times only poetry can express the deep desires of heart and soul!
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@ Alcina: Even your writings at times are mere longings waiting to be heard and curbed!
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@ Mani: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it :)
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you here hope you had a good time...hoping to see you again and I'll surely visit your space too :)
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@ Ria: Thanks dear :)
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@ Andy: Yes love is all around and an ethereal beauty beyond time and imagination!
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@ Poonam: :)
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@ Suruchi: Thank you!
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@ GV sparks: love lovely loveliest :P
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@ Yaadein: Thanks a lot!
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@ Manshaa: Thanks a lot dear..glad you liked it :)
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