Sunday, October 9, 2011

Chapter 3:


Chapter 3:

He ran hard and fast stopping at the lone abandoned bench in the midst of the forest. Sitting down he let out a rugged sigh realizing the mess he was entangled in; reflecting back he realized life had been peaceful and full of mirth with her, until a very prominent part of past returned evoking chaos!

-Fatima
P.S: I hope you understood what I meant by "her" and "past".

9 comments:

  1. interesting build up.. just read all 3 chapters. And I like the style too. Like a bite of pizza, quick and tasty :)

    aJ

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  2. arre...but why give us itne thode doses-by the time you put up the next, we have to read the previous ones again...you must write more...give out some more:-)

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  3. I love this chapter.. Very interesting.. Waiting for more..

    Someone is Special

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  4. Getting interesting...lets c what comes up next.

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  5. @ aakash: Thanks a lot...glad you liked it ! :)

    TC

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  6. @ suruchi: Thank you! btw Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai haina ;)

    TC

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  7. @ SIS: Glad you liked it..thanks a lot! :)

    TC

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