Tonight I feel the need to be engulfed in your arms,
Rest my head on your heart,
And listen to the rhythm that surrounds,
Forgetting the world around…
A moment of bliss,
A moment of joy,
Hoping you won’t deny…
Is all that I have been wishing.
I don’t know how does it feel,
To be loved by the one you love,
For once I wish to be there,
To feel and revel.
To stare in your eyes,
To look in your soul,
To melt and merge in you,
Though it only last for a day…
I wish I were the key,
To unlock the doors of your heart,
And know I’m the one,
Who resides in thee…
Tonight yet again I feel the need,
To be the laughter in your silence,
The memory in your moments,
And the song that your heart sings…
- Fatima
hey fatima
ReplyDeleteglad to see you posted this... :)
nice sensitive poem
beautifully penned....actually it reminded me "the 2.30 hr long trip through the city"....hmm i know the coz i guess....but neways i loved it...:)
ReplyDeletewow.. a bful sunday starts with a bful writing about world's most bful feeling..
ReplyDeletewe girls always want to be possessed and held by the one.. isn't it? loved it again fatima!
ReplyDeleteFatima :)
Quirky stuff, there. I mean, well incomplete stories and all. It's been ages I read or wrote myself anything such as this. Beautiful, though, beautiful poem.
the last two paragraphs took my heart away-such depth my god!
ReplyDeleteand then again the line that breaks my heart:
"I don’t know how does it feel,
To be loved by the one you love"
such eternity in them:-)
I know ... dont know what to say but I can understand what you say and mean
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Nice one.. Good Going :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem dear...love the last para.
ReplyDeleteWhen I read this poem..I felt I'm listening to a song...<3
ReplyDeleteLovely lines dear
@ ivre: Thanks a lot dear...your feedback means a lot :)
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@ vaisakhi: Glad it reminded you of that journey but ermm its not just about it!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot..and glad you liked it!
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@ Deepika: Awe it feels so good when someone tells that something by them has made their day or something on similar terms :)
ReplyDeleteAnd who doesn't wanna be protected and loved..the feeling and joy is inexpressible in words...the feeling itself is so complete itself !
Glad you liked it...thank u <3
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@ Kankshita: Now I really need to apologize that I'm not following your work but please I'll soon coz I know I've got loads to read :)
ReplyDeleteI really can't comment on your reply but all I can say is glad you liked it!
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@ Suruchi: Thanks a lot! I'm touched that it touched you :)
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@ Bikramjit: I guess I know what you meant by it and what it feels too!
ReplyDeleteI just pray all that your feeling and the phase your going through passes soon!
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@ sti: Thanks a lot dear :)
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@ Ria: Thank you dear...glad that you liked it ! :)
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@ Valli: Awe that's a compliment...felt good listening that you felt it was a song..I wish I had the right music for it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot !
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I don’t know how does it feel,
ReplyDeleteTo be loved by the one you love,
For once I wish to be there,
To feel and revel.
very true lines :)
To be the laughter in your silence,
i guess smile would have been a better word... if love persists :)
@ GV Sparks: Hmm...I did think of whilst writing but somehow it was silence that overtook :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it..Thanks
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