From The Bottom of
My Heart!
Years
rolled and seasons changed,
Yet
everything still remained the same...
Spring
meant joy and winter bought gloom,
Still I
was the same, all lonesome!
Only
friendship ruled,
And
love didn't mean a thing...
But it
doesn't seem to be true anymore,
As your
now a part of my soul!
Words
fall short and emotions overflow,
One
moment I'm dancing like a daffodil...
The
other as dull as a withering rose,
Yet I
dunno how should I tell ??
That, I
love you in the spring...
And
love you even in the fall...
In noon
and also the moonlit hours,
And
will always, with my heart and soul!
-Fatima
P.S: I had written this poem back then on 17th March '11 on the request of a friend of mine...Finally posting it here :)
"Words fall short and emotions overflow" I loved this line the most of all.
ReplyDeleteHope the loneliness passes away with time and every season brings reasons to rejoice.. :-)
It's filled with lots of emotions :)
ReplyDeleteNaice!
weaved from bottom of the heart indeed :)
yes very nice,
ReplyDeleteThat, I love you in the spring...
And love you even in the fall...
In noon and also the moonlit hours,
And will always, with my heart and soul!
Lovely words...
Nicely composed to showcase the beauty of friendship……
ReplyDeleteThe post should have come much before. It's poetic in many ways. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Loved it...u shud hav posted it long ago!
ReplyDeletemy kind of poem on friendship and what it means
ReplyDeleteBikram's
loved it...long back....guess i was the 1st one to read it...:P....n hope she liked it too...:)
ReplyDeletethe last paragraph is dipped in such eternity:-)
ReplyDeletevery expressive n poetic and yes, seasons to reflect us in many ways and also how we feel:-)
Very beautiful....Love is love....Change of seasons doesn't matter !!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful angelkins, love it to the core for its simple elegance. - Sara
ReplyDeleteI love the picture :)
ReplyDeleteAnd the poem is so sweet. I loved how you ended it :)
Only heartfelt emotions can string such beautiful words together. Nice poem:)
ReplyDeletelovely words...beautifully crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful...
ReplyDelete@ Manshaa: Replying here almost 6-7 months later and all I can say is its warm n merry :)
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@ Alcina: It is indeed...
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it :)
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@ the other side of me: Thanks a lot dear :)
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@ deeps: Thanks a lot...
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@ BA: Sometimes, its not the right time and other times the time is not right...either way it came then and the replies now :)
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@ Ria: I know but sometimes you just have to wait a bit more :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear!
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@ Bikram: :)
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@ Vaisakhi: Yeap, you were..and yea she liked it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the review
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@ Suruchi: Well not just seasons, there is a lot more too :)
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@ Valli: Thanks a lot :)
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@ Sara: Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it.
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@ Philo: Thank You !
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@ Aishwarya: I guess so..but sometimes even after feeling words don't come out...that's difficult!
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@ Kalyan: Thanks a lot.
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@ Surendra: Thanks.
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Beautiful writing straight from heart, Fatima:)
ReplyDelete@ Rahul Bhatia: Thanks a lot Uncle :)
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